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 A Walk in Winter Woods
« Thread Started on Jan 29, 2007, 5:22am »



A Walk in Winter Woods


Aloft above, the white pine boughs,
so laden with the snow, they bow,
and through the woods a wondrous scene
of snow upon the evergreen.

The meadows withered grassy blade
now under snowy blanket laid.
“So quiet”, very seldom heard
a chirping squirrel or song of bird.

The tracks of several white tail deer
first follow path then off they veer.
Perhaps I’ll even have the chance
to see them with a fleeting glance.

I walk beyond the path to find
a trail the rabbit left behind,
while sky and hills begin to blend
as clouds that bring more snow descend.

The sky now gray, the hour late,
one moment more to contemplate.




To home now turn
the tinder spark,
and flames will burn
before the dark.
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« Reply #1 on Jan 29, 2007, 7:10am »

I enjoyed your poem with its blanket of Snow, wiping all sound too, but still with so much of nature to see. Good rhyme and a lovely flow, look forward to some more.
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« Reply #2 on Feb 5, 2007, 9:30am »

Thank you for your kind comment alytatt. This could become a very good poetry forum if it could gain more participation.
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« Reply #3 on Mar 7, 2007, 12:12pm »


That's such a beautiful poem :D
It paints a very lovely picture
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« Reply #4 on Mar 12, 2007, 3:06am »


The meadows withered grassy blade
now under snowy blanket laid.
“So quiet”, very seldom heard
a chirping squirrel or song of bird.



This is beautifully written. A very wonderful piece.

I enjoyed the read.


-- w. a. k.


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