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« Thread Started on Nov 26, 2006, 12:01pm » | |
Don’t give up
Always you get the chance to brighten up your day
A kind thought lights up the cloud which appeared so grey
Bring your problems inside out do find a better side
And forget all the woes and worries in life’s stride.
There’s always a choice to help someone in need
A friendly smile will soothe any wrong indeed,
You can lay hope into a doubtful soul and faith –
Tomorrow’s dawn will show new confidence on his face.
Don’t ever think it’s not worth while to care and share
‘cause in this world reign fights, sadness and despair.
What you can do, even it may seem not enough
Still is so much of help to someone – don’t give up!
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« Reply #1 on Nov 26, 2006, 8:52pm » | |
So True! Well-written, very beautiful words indeed.
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« Reply #2 on Nov 30, 2006, 5:27pm » | |
Ursula, so right you are my friend, never give up, when you do, you've lost whatever you gained in life. Your words brings this out in the very beautiful poem you've written. Your words brighten up my day, dear friend...........Roland....
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« Reply #3 on Dec 3, 2006, 3:58am » | |
Thank you both for your kindness to take time to read and comment on my "wee wisdom". Ursula
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